Friday, December 21, 2012

Never Give Up



Author's Note: We were told to write a theme essay on a book we had recently read. I decided to choose the book Where the Red Fern Grows because I liked the themes that it had throughout it. Pay attention to how I relate the story to my life and other things in the world.

"You can't just sit back and watch the world change, it matters what you've got to say. There's no one else who can stand in your place, so come on it's never too late." The lyrics that Hannah Montana sings in her song "Make Some Noise" relates to the main character in the book Where the Red Fern Grows by Wilson Rawls. In this book, Billy demonstrates determination, sacrifice and the love of his family which helps him overcome different events and grow to be be a young man.

Bethany Hamilton was close to being a pro- teenage surfer and had lost her arm due to a shark accident. She was pretty much at her peak moment right then and there, and she didn't want to give up surfing just because she had a handicap. Surfing was Bethany's passion and she didn't want to do anything else, so she decided to try surfing again after she was recovered. The first couple of times, she didn't succeed and was almost ready to throw it down the drain, but a little voice inside her head kept telling her to push forward. Just like Bethany Hamilton was determined to surf like nothing had ever changed, Billy Coleman desperately wanted a pair of hunting dogs. Dogs that could help his family out by making money by the raccoon they killed. He has troubles with this though, because his father always says, "No son, those pups are just too expensive". At one point in time, Billy hears of a pup for sale at his grandpa's store down the road and checks it out. By the time he had gotten there, the Pritchard’s, his enemies, had already beaten him to it. This got him discouraged until he saw a piece of newspaper lying on the ground. One of the ads caught his attention, so he reads on. Little did he know that the tiny little ad in his hands would change his perspective on his crummy day. As he walked on home, he continued to look at the article and saw that there were 2 red hounds for sale: $25 each. Billy knew what he had to do: he wanted to purchase the dogs of his dreams that he has forever been longing to have.  He comes to a conclusion that the only way he's going to get that money is if he works, so that is exactly what he starts to do. That boy was so determined, he eventually managed to earn enough money with many long and hard hours of work. 

In the midst of Billy being determined to find his dogs, he has a tight bond with his family. Even when he is on his way to buy his dogs, he goes out of his way to be generous towards his family. He buys candy for his sisters, Alice and Sarah, a pair of new blue jean overalls for his dad, and enough fabric for his mother to make many new dresses. Billy also goes through a hard decision in "the hunt". He has two choices, to go save his grandpa from rolling down the hill in the storm, or to keep hunting to win the trophy. Most people would keep hunting for the prize, but being the caring person he is, Marty puts his bow down and goes to help his hurting grandpa. After the hunt is over, Billy is taken by surprise when he is awarded the winner of the hunt instead of the man who got the most animals. The man who had won gave up his own trophy because in his mind, Billy really had won because of his loyalty he showed toward his family. This reminds me of my parents and how they gave up the luxuries of life to spend more time with my siblings and I. They never had a brand new car and wouldn't think twice about sending us to day cares. Instead, they would take us on trips, bring us bike riding and take us with them to have picnics in the park.

Not only does Billy have a tight bond with his family, but he has a tight bond with his dogs as well. in chapter 20, Big Dan builds up the courage to stand in front of the mountain lion and risk his life for his friends, Little Ann and his owner, Billy. In result, the mountain lion ends up killing Old Dan, but Little Ann and Billy remain alive. This reminds me of something that just recently happened in Brookfield down by a local nail salon. A man came to the salon and was about to shoot his daughter who worked at the salon. They  just so happened to be in a fight so that had made terms even worse. The man was about to fire when another lady who worked with the daughter at the salon came and took the bullet. She sacrificed her own life so that her friend could live. Near the end, after suffering without her best friend, Little Ann refuses to eat. She can't bear the fact that he is gone, and she decides she can't live without him. Marty found her the next morning lying there, no heartbeat right by Old Dan's grave. He cried and cried but knew he had to move on. Billy made a decision that the best thing to do was bury her right by Old Dan. After a couple days, his family was getting ready to move to a different city, but Billy wanted to say bye to his best friends once more. He tries to hold his tears in, but he can't help the blurriness that he now saw. He let the tears drop down, until he saw something unusual and he rapidly wiped his tears away. Right smack-dab in front of him was a red fern the grew right in between the two dog's graves which represented something very sacred. Billy realized that not many people get to experience something as amazing as this, it's a rarity. 
In this heartfelt story, a boy named Billy Coleman becomes more mature and grown up when he expresses his determination, love of his family, and sacrifice. He goes through many different hurdles in his life such as the scare with his grandpa falling down a hill in the midst of a thunderstorm, having a scare with a mountain lion, and losing his two best friends. Billy had a tight bond with his dogs that only he could understand, and was blessed with the time he was able to have with them. After all, a dog really is a man's best friend. 

Tuesday, November 20, 2012

Getting to Know Someone

Author's Note: This piece is an alternate ending/ prediction to the story Buried Treasure in the series 315. It shows what I think will happen to the two characters and how they eventually become great friends.

In the story Buried Treasure, I think that the end of the story is going to result in Clarence having a talk with Cody who changes his perspective on life. I have a feeling that when Cody finally finds out the story about old Clarence, he will become good friends with him and go to visit him everyday. I have this feeling because old men are usually very kind and wise once you get to know them. Eventually, Cody will ask about the golden hook just because the city has always wondered. Although, he will be taken back by the answer he receives from the elder. In the beginning, Clarence won't accept the food that Cody brings him because of some anger he still has towards the city. After time though, he will begin to accept the food and be grateful for Cody, his best friend. Clarence would get lonely in the woods everyday and when Cody comes, he will realize just how much he missed having someone to talk to and be there for him. 

Wednesday, November 14, 2012

Transforming into a Different Person


Author's Note: This piece is one way to express character analysis. It shows how Bella changes dramatically in the series of the Twilight books. She becomes a different person when she falls in love with a vampire. Bella develops a whole new perspective on the rainy city of Forks when she meets this boy named Edward. After being an angry, sad girl, in the beginning, she transforms to being happy and content to conclude the end.
Bella
Quiet, Clumsy, smart
Daughter of Charlie and Renee
Edward, Jacob, Charlie
nervous, confused, angry
Has a near death experience with a vampire, almost gets kidnapped, becomes trapped with someone who wants to kill her
falls in love
Wants to become a vampire, wants to live forever with Edward
Forks, Washington
Swan


Bella

Strong, Smart, Protective, Elegant

Daughter of Charlie and Renee, Mother of Renesme, Wife of Edward

Edward, Charlie, Renesme

Thirst for blood, happiness, compassionate

Losing her family, having to fight against the Volturri, giving Renesme up because Jacob was destined to be with her

Who discovered it was much easier to be around Edward when she was finally a vampire, found out that it was possible to have a baby with Edward while she was still human

Wanted to experience being a vampire, wanted to live forever with Edward, wanted to have a child

Forks, Washington

Cullen


Bella Swan reminds me of Katniss Everdeen from the Hunger Games. They both change dramatically, from not wanting to do with anyone to having to eventually get to know people they were surrounded by. Katniss had to connect with the other tributes so she could survive: Bella had to make friends at her new school. They also were both involved in a love triangle, with two other guys falling in love with them.  These two girls discover that all they had to be was slightly more friendly to everyone and overcome their shyness to make the friends that they were certain would last.

Katniss

Stubborn, shy, smart, independent

Daughter of Mr. and Mrs. Everdeen (Names not mentioned in book)

Prim, Gale, Her Mother

Bravery, Courage, Leadership, Love

Losing her sister, Not surviving, Fear that her mother would ignore her sister like she had ignored her when her father had died

Discovered that being friendly could go a long way, found out that Peeta had liked her ever since she was little

District 12(Location not mentioned)

Everdeen



Katniss

Friendly, Proud, Dependent

Daughter of Mr. and Mrs. Everdeen, Mother of Willow and Rye, Wife of Peeta

Peeta, Prim, Willow, Rye

Love, Friendship, Trustworthiness

Fear of losing Gale if she went to marry Peeta

Figured out that she was better suited for Peeta than for Gale because Gale was always negative about things and that's not what she liked, figured out she actually did love Peeta

District 12

Mellark






Monday, October 29, 2012

"What would you tell America's founding fathers?"


Author's Note: This is piece I based off of the writing prompt," What would you tell America's founding fathers?" for the Patriot's Pen essay. Notice my higher level in word choice and A and B transitions throughout it.
In some moments, I wonder how it was during the time of the founding fathers. If I was alive during that time, what would I say to them? What kind of morals and way of life do they live? During the busy lives of us Americans, we tend to push aside the honor that the founding fathers truly deserve.
If you happened to do a survey of how many people knew who the founding fathers were, only a couple people would say they knew. In my opinion, I feel that they need more recognition. After all, if they have schools, states and other things named after them, they must have done something pretty spectacular for our country. For example: the state of Washington and the capital of the United States named after George Washington, Jefferson City, Missouri named after Thomas Jefferson and many dollar bills with faces of the founding fathers on different ones.
How did the founding fathers help our country, you ask? Well a huge part of their history is  signing the Declaration of Independence. In result of them doing this, we gained freedom and were saved from being under Britain's control. We tend to overlook our freedom that we're blessed with.   It may be difficult to comprehend, but people are out fighting in wars, risking their lives so we can live in a free country.
One of the components that we should be grateful for is freedom, but another one is having such great presidents. Currently, we are undergoing an election for our next president who will lead our country. We have truly been blessed for having presidents that dedicate their lives to the United States. Even after the founding fathers and 200 years of presidents, we are still reaping the benefits of having a strong country with many resources.
We tend to overlook it, but the founding fathers really had an impact on our country that we need to start recognizing. They truly did a great job starting our country, going through all the hard work and dedication. I am proud to be an American and I am proud of my founding fathers who have protected and preserved our country. 

Monday, October 22, 2012

Cancer

Author's Note: This piece is a personal narrative about how my grandpa ends up getting diagnosed with cancer. Notice my more advanced word choice and voice.

Cancer is a hard thing to grasp. One moment you’re as healthy as can be and the next, you are in the intensive care taking 15 different medicines. The hard thing is, you can’t control it. It just comes and catches you off guard. Well one thing's for sure, this event that happened with my grandpa caught my attention and had the whole family puzzled.

This horrifying, uncontrollable disease hit my grandpa, Roger, faster than he could blink. He was just walking to the mailbox one day and all of a sudden he fell to the ground, experiencing an excruciating pain in his leg. Being the stubborn man that he was, he tried to delay letting my grandma know what had happened.

The pain ended up getting so bad, he had to go to the doctor. He was hoping they would say that it was only temporary pain, that it was harmless. Except when the nurse came out with the test results, she said ,"Sir, I'm sorry. I'm afraid you've been diagnosed with acute leukemia. It's one of the fastest spreading cancers we know. I'm not sure how much longer you have to live." Shock came over him like a massive tidal wave in the Atlantic Ocean. He couldn't believe his ears.

My family was notified a day later. We all were blown away. Catching my breath I exclaimed, "How could this happen, Mom?! He's the healthiest 80 year old I know!" "I'm not sure, sweetie", my mom said back to me sniffling. Before I knew it, we were off to the hospital to visit Grandpa Roger.

When I walked into his hospital room, I gasped. “That can’t be grandpa,” I said to my sister, Bethany. My grandpa sat on the bed with huge purple welts all over his body. He could barely open his drowsy eyes that would soon be falling into a deep sleep. My aunts and uncles surrounded him, each taking turns saying that we loved him. When it was my turn, I went up to his hospital bed and said, “I love you so much, grandpa.” Since he was on so many meds, I knew that he wouldn’t be able to say anything back.  Except faintly, I could hear him say, “ I love you too, Christina”. That made me start bawling because I knew I wasn’t ever going to see him alive again. It was time to say goodbye.

In the end, cancer took my grandpa’s life. It hurt me so much losing a loved one. Although, I learned an important life lesson: we can’t always take things for granted. Sometimes you have to stop everything you’re doing and realize what you already have in front of you.

Saturday, October 20, 2012

Sometimes Volunteering Will Help


Author's Note: In this piece, I express the different cause and effects I see in the book called The Hunger Games and relate it to something in my own life.


In The Hunger Games, Katniss volunteers for her sister, Prim, in the reaping. She did this because she knew Prim wouldn't know how to survive due to it being her first year involved. Katniss also knew many survival skills because she was frequently in the woods hunting for food: she wasn’t sure how she was going to win, but she wanted to win for Prim. Survival is a strength that is required throughout this book and also in both my aunts lives.

This affected in Katniss having to participate in the Hunger Games, coming close to encounters of death. Volunteering for Prim also caused Katniss many battle scars, such as her injured leg that eventually healed. If Katniss hadn't volunteered for her younger sister,  Prim most likely would have been dead due to her lack of survival skills. It would have had a whole different, depressing effect on the story if an older sister didn't stand up for her younger sister.

I can relate Prim and Katniss' situation to my own life. My Aunt Bonnie and my Aunt Jane are very close sisters that were inseparable. They would do lots of things together, until one day when something occurred to them that they hadn't been expecting. My Aunt Jane had been diagnosed with cancer and was only given a couple of months to live. Aunt Bonnie stood with Aunt Jane no matter what, even when she had hard times and didn't think she was going to live through the day. Aunt Jane also developed battle scars over the course of time during her cancer treatments.

Both of these examples show the dedication and the hardship that each sibling had to experience and express. Each encounter got more difficult as time went on: Prim, Katniss, Aunt Jane and Aunt Bonnie never gave up. They continued to push forward even when the pain was unbearable. This shows how strong one human being can be and how they can completely change their perspective when they set their mind to the outcome being positive.

Friday, October 12, 2012

Among the Hidden


Author's Note: This is a piece I wrote about the book Among the Hidden. Pay attention to how I show the conflict and resolution throughout the story. 

In Among the Hidden, it's against the law to have over two children because the society is going through a famine. Luke is a third child, so his parents have to break the law and keep him hidden away from the Population Police. Due to this so called "hide-and-seek", Luke hasn't been outside since he was a little kid. He runs into some encounters with the police, but he manages not to get caught by them. 

Since he can't do much else, Luke looks out a certain window every day, at the same time, with a view of his subdivision. He remembers seeing movement in his next door neighbor's window. To free his curiosity, he breaks into that house and discovers another third child, a girl named Jen. Turns out that her dad works for the Population Police, but is undercover trying to help third children. 


In the end, Luke decides to break free from his sheltered home. He builds up enough courage to step foot outside, to see what the real world is like without his normal routine. Luke goes from being a third child, to an impostor who outsmarts the society because of Jen’s dad who was able to create a fake I.D. for him. With the fake I.D., he is able to live the life like he isn't a third child. Instead, he lives the life of someone else and it's not as risky getting caught by the police when he's undercover. He has to say goodbye to his family, who is tough enough but the options that are at stake are gruesome: either he lives the life of someone else and hopes he doesn't get caught or he is always worrying he will be caught as a third child and be shot at any waking second.


Luke decides to take the safest route. He goes from being in a stuffy room while forgetting what the outdoors smells like to five course meals and chandeliers hanging from the ceiling. The fake I.D. that Jen's dad created for him was the handiest thing he could have done . It was a hard choice parting from his family, but it paid off for him in the end.