With my sunglasses on, flip-flops clicking, and
sunscreen lathered, the seashells wash up on shore as the white waves crash to
the sand and touch my toes. I have finally made it to the beach where there are
no more harsh temperatures while frozen snowflakes melt on my bundled up body.
I can finally break out of my shell and run free while watching the sunset as
it reflects on the calm ocean waters. The ocean dances back and forth, to and
from the awaiting sand as I sip a fruity smoothie which I can have at any time
I desire it. The sand seeps through my toes as a pedicurist would before
painting my toenails. I breathe in, and breathe out the fresh aroma of
newly-baked corn-dogs, snow cone flavorings and the pure scent of sea-salt as I
soak up the warm sunny rays with people stretching across the whole shoreline.
The other vacationers are doing the same as me, but I don't notice them because
everything seems too good to be true. As a matter of fact, it feels like a
dream that I've always longed to experience: a dream where I crossed the
borderline of the United States, and branched off and explored in a different
country. At last, I get the chance to experience what I have dreamed of
forever: new country, different language, different way of life, and all of it
is different and utter paradise all at the same time.
This is a really good piece! Your similes are rally good, and I can pick them out. I think that you will have so much fun there! Great job, and keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteYou had good imagery, because it felt like I was there. Great job keep up the good work.
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