Beach Time

Author's Note: This a creative piece I wrote about this upcoming spring break I used some similes that tie into my piece. I have never been out of the country, so it'll be a whole different setting from this frigid winter. Puerto Vallarta here I come! :)

With my sunglasses on, flip-flops clicking, and sunscreen lathered, the seashells wash up on shore as the white waves crash to the sand and touch my toes. I have finally made it to the beach where there are no more harsh temperatures while frozen snowflakes melt on my bundled up body. I can finally break out of my shell and run free while watching the sunset as it reflects on the calm ocean waters. The ocean dances back and forth, to and from the awaiting sand as I sip a fruity smoothie which I can have at any time I desire it. The sand seeps through my toes as a pedicurist would before painting my toenails. I breathe in, and breathe out the fresh aroma of newly-baked corn-dogs, snow cone flavorings and the pure scent of sea-salt as I soak up the warm sunny rays with people stretching across the whole shoreline. The other vacationers are doing the same as me, but I don't notice them because everything seems too good to be true. As a matter of fact, it feels like a dream that I've always longed to experience: a dream where I crossed the borderline of the United States, and branched off and explored in a different country. At last, I get the chance to experience what I have dreamed of forever: new country, different language, different way of life, and all of it is different and utter paradise all at the same time. 

"Oh, how our country has changed"

Author's Note: We were told to write a creative piece and I decided to write in the format of a letter to the Founding Fathers. Through this letter, I tell them how our world has changed so much since they were living here in the 1700's.

Dear Founding Fathers,

The times have changed drastically since your time. There are no longer horses and buggies, but cars that are constantly being improved over time. There are no longer payphones that charge you a quarter every minute you talk on it, but instead wireless cell phones that allow you to play games, search on the internet, and call/instant message other people. There are still wars going on all over the world, and in my opinion, I don't think they will ever stop. If they do, they just start right back up again. I want our country and other countries to be at peace, but it seems as if our country is never satisfied with what we have. Troops were out in Afghanistan and Iraq, and some may still be there now. It's not required for young men to go to war when they are 18 anymore because they are given a choice to decide what career they would like to pursue as an alternative. Some men become doctors, electricians, plumbers, and etc. Women are allowed to be in wars now, to help with everything that needs to be tended to. Most train for nursing, although more and more are wanting to fight in the actual battle. I have already listed many points that have showed the differences in our country from now and back in the day. One thing will always stay the same is thankfulness. Thankfulness from our country for what outstanding things you have lead us to today.

Thanks so much for your great deeds,

Christina H. 

"Always focus on how far you've come, rather than how far you have left to go"

Author's Note: This is a creative piece I was assigned to write. I decided to write it on theme and I used A B transitions in it as well.

Missing someone is hard enough, but being a far distance is equally difficult. People deal with this situation every day, and they have a hard time overcoming it. In the book Dear John by Nicholas Sparks, it shows how passionate the love is for both individuals and how they will do anything to stay a pair. John and Savannah love one another, try their best to keep their family together and work their hardest to push the sadness aside in their life.

The character John, who was a former veteran in the army expresses his kindness when he jumps in the water to save Savannah’s purse. “I finally felt bottom and trudged out the surf. I shook the water from my hair, started up the sand, and met them halfway up the beach. I held out the bag. ‘Here you go,’ ‘Thank you,” the brunette said, and when she met my eyes I felt something click, like a key turning in a lock. Believe me, I’m no romantic, and when I’ve heard all about love at first sight, I’ve never believed in it, and I still don’t. But even so, there was something there, something recognizably real and I couldn’t look away.” (p.35) This caught Savannah’s attention and she started to wonder about John. Eventually, she invited him to a bonfire she was hosting with her friends and he automatically fell head over heels with her, only to find out that there was another man that loved her just the same. “You’ll meet Tim later. He’s a great guy. You’ll like him. Everybody does.”(p.37) He could tell that Savannah had a little something for Tim as well. Most guys would give up in a situation like this, but he keeps fighting to stay by her side, even in the rough times when he had to apologize for being angry at her right before he had to go back to fighting in war. “I was stumped. I searched my mind before meeting her eyes. ‘And...’ I trailed off. ‘And what?’ ‘And...’ I tried but I couldn’t come up with anything. ‘I don’t know,’ I confessed. ‘But whatever it is, I’m sorry for that, too.’”(p.160)

Love is a crucial component in this story, along with family that holds them all together like gorilla glue. Savannah is one of those characters who love being outdoors and spending time with her family. “We’re volunteering. You’ve heard of Habitat for Humanity, right? We’re down here to build a couple of houses. My family’s been involved with it for years.” (p.38) You could say she’s a people person who can talk to almost everyone. On the other hand, John grew up with his Dad and hardly ever talked to him. Sometimes he couldn’t even make conversation with him because of their lack of connection. His dad loved coins but soon it got to be too much for John and he snapped. In result to this outbreak, his dad would just say “okay,” or completely avoid the subject by saying a one worded response when he had asked a question. When John met Savannah, he let all of his feelings out about his father when they started talking about family.  “’I know,’ I said. ‘But it’s not just that. We’ve always been strangers. I mean, it’s just so hard to talk to him.’”(p.70) Back when John was a teenager, his dad had mentioned to him that he reminded him of his wife, John’s mom, who was a very stubborn woman. This offended John, but he finally realized years later that it’s worth a lot more to show him forgiveness and accept the fact that he doesn’t talk to him, and most likely never would. Throughout the book, Savannah, being the down-to-earth girl that she is, is able to bring John and his dad’s distant relationship back together. She tells John that she thinks his dad has high-functioning autism. It takes awhile for John to accept this fact, but later realizes that it must be true. He put the pieces of the puzzle together: the difficult speech, the repetitive meals, all the same routines, all of it made sense to him at last. “In the end, surprising myself again, I admitted we were almost strangers. ‘You are,” she said using that nonjudgmental, matter-of-fact tone. ‘You’ve been gone for a couple years, even you admit that you’ve changed. How could he know you?” (p.70) If it weren’t for Savannah, John wouldn’t have been able to be next to his father’s bedside during his last days of life. “‘Okay.’ He finally said. I smiled at his response. I couldn’t help it. ‘I love you, Dad.” To this he knew exactly what to say, for it had always been part of his routine. ‘I love you too, John.’” (p.249)

When Savannah and John try their best to keep their families staying active and well, things lead to sorrow and sadness. The dream couple decide it’s better to be away from each other once John goes back to war and receives a letter that was written to him. “I know that sounds like an excuse, but please believe me, when I say I didn’t mean to fall in love with someone else. If I don’t even understand how it happened, how can you?”(p.229) Savannah tries to move on and eventually falls in love with her neighbor, Tim, and gets married. John finds out about Savannah and he experiences one of the hardest times of his life, because his Dad dies that same year as well. Savannah is never fully happy because John was her first true love. Although she is happy with Tim, he is always at the hospital because he has lymphoma, which is a difficult cancer to fight. She becomes very lonely when her lover isn’t there with her to keep her company. Tim’s little brother, who has autism lives with both of them. He would go to the hospital for the whole day from early morning till late at night. This whole cancer situation was hard on Alan, the little brother, too, because he didn’t like seeing his big brother in pain. John comes back from the war on one of his leaves to visit his dad at the funeral, and decides to visit Savannah after he said his last goodbyes. He knows that it doesn’t feel like it had when they were in love from the start and gives her the news that they will never see each other again after he wishes the best to Tim. “She slowed her steps when she spotted me, then came to a stop. No hug, no kiss---the sudden formality made me ache.” (p.159) He knows Tim is a good guy, and wants the best for Savannah, so he sells his dad’s coin collection to pay for Tim’s cancer anonymously. Tim’s cancer is cured and him and Savannah live the life of a fairytale. “‘Is there anything I can do?’ I closed my eyes, thinking of Savannah and Tim and hoping that somehow my dad would forgive me for what I was about to do. ‘Yes,’ I said to the coin dealer. ‘actually there is. I want to sell my dad’s coin collection, and I need the money as quickly as you can get it to me.” (p.330)

The two lovebirds in this book try to rid of sadness, love each other, and give it their best effort to have healthy families. Times get rough, and they even get separated in the process, but they still have a burning love for each other. John still loves Savannah and he pays for Tim’s cancer expenses because he loves her to that extent. This book teaches the lesson that we should go for our dreams and never give up on them, because life takes its turn in your favor, even if we can’t see it.

Hard Times, Hard Lives, What are we to do?

Author's note: Life is difficult enough with the dangers of this world. There are so many diseases that us people can go through, but I think the roughest of them all is cancer. Cancer is like a lion looking for whom it may devour, it finds someone, healthy or unhealthy and usually gives them zero chances of hope. I decided to write a poem about cancer, to show a perspective on how much it affects others in their times of sadness.

Crying friends, 

crying family

by your bedside

nothing you can do

nothing you can say

to make everything be okay.

You wonder what is going on

How this unfathomable crisis happened to you

what to do to make your loved ones faces turn from being blue.

Sorrow fills the air

hearts break and tears shed

pain in your body

trying to hide it with a smile.

Being a sacrifice

glad in a way that it was you instead of them

still hard to bear

how can it compare

to times like other days?

When the sun shined through the darkest window

the hearts were together as one

the sunset reflecting on the ocean waves.

You know its hard

you know its rough

its tough

I'll miss you, it's true

but I will see you all again someday.

I Couldn't Stay

Author's Note: This is a creative poem I wrote about a picture of a lady riding a horse. 

You stand here and in the sight of your eyes,

You see the view, although I’m in disguise.

The question you ponder waits, and the words that you say linger

But you should always know the ring still sits on my finger

The days feel like years now and I’m sorry I let you down

but I should have known better than that: you just wanted the crown.

Know that I’m torn, but I’m not coming back

I know being truthful is hard, it’s something I lack.

I’m hoping someday you realize,

all you see is the view, while I’m in disguise.

"You Thought I Was Trouble"

Author's Note: This piece is written on point of view on a song called "I Knew You Were Trouble". I wrote my own version of the song and explained how the song changed by having a different point of view.

“I Knew You Were Trouble” By Taylor Swift

Once upon a time, a few mistakes ago

I was in your sights, you got me alone
You found me, you found me, you found me
I guess you didn't care, and I guess I liked that
And when I fell hard you took a step back
Without me, without me, without me

And he's long gone when he's next to me
And I realize the blame is on me

'Cause I knew you were trouble when you walked in
So shame on me now
Flew me to places I'd never been
'Til you put me down, oh
I knew you were trouble when you walked in
So shame on me now
Flew me to places I'd never been
Now I'm lying on the cold hard ground
Oh, oh, trouble, trouble, trouble
Oh, oh, trouble, trouble, trouble

No apologies, he'll never see you cry
Pretend he doesn't know that he's the reason why
You're drowning, you're drowning, you're drowning
Now I heard you moved on from whispers on the street
A new notch in your belt is all I'll ever be
And now I see, now I see, now I see

He was long gone when he met me
And I realize the joke is on me, yeah!

“You Thought I Was Trouble” By Christina Heinritz

Once upon a time, a while ago

I saw you there, I got you alone

I found you, I found you, I found you

I cared so much, but you didn’t see

When you fell hard, how much you meant to me

I miss you, I miss you, I miss you

And she’s gone too far when I’m next to her

And she thinks that the blame is on her

Cause she thought I was trouble when I walked in

But little does she know

Flew her to places she’s never been

That I love her so, oh

She thought I was trouble when I walked in

But little does she know

I had no idea this would be the way

So sorry my girl, I had to leave

Oh, oh, no choice,  choice, choice

Oh, oh, no choice, choice, choice

I didn’t apologize, I made her cry

I’m so guilty now, she says I’m the reason why

I’m drowning, I’m drowning, I’m drowning

You heard I moved on from whispers on the street

But you have no idea, what you meant to me

And now you’ll see, now you’ll see, now you’ll see

I was long gone, when I met you

But now I regret ever leaving you, yeah

There are many people who have been in a hard breakup rather than not. They tend to feel at fault for the relationship crashing and usually someone ends up in pain. The lyrics that Taylor Swift sings in the song, "I Knew You Were Trouble,” relates to her experience of a memory she had of a hard break-up. She thought she knew why the break-up occurred, but she finally was told the truth from her boyfriend about his plan to go off to war.

I knew you were trouble when you walked in, so shame on me now, flew me to places I'd never been, til' you put me down, oh! This song is telling fans that T-Swift fell for a guy that she knew would bring her trouble. Even though her boyfriend appeared dangerous, she clung to his angelic smile. He was very mysterious and kept secrets from Taylor that she would have never guessed of. Sometimes she thought that she should just end it, right then and there because she didn’t like the secrets being kept from her ears. She finally decided against that thought. Swift’s producer, Anthony Mandler, explains how she deals with her emotions, “She wanted to tell a story of a doomed love and a good girl pushed to the brink. She had dealt with trouble, but not this particular situation." Taylor Swift thought that he left her because he was seeing another girl.                                                                                                

 "I Knew You Were Trouble" was written in Taylor Swift’s perspective; I wanted to make a song in the guy’s point of view as he responds to Swift and explains himself. Taylor thought that he was trouble because she assumed he was cheating on her. Zack, her boyfriend, writes a song back explaining how he was actually going off to war to fight for his country. It was impossible for him to tell her that he couldn’t be with her; instead of telling the truth, he figured it’d be easier to leave without saying goodbye. She thought I was trouble when I walked in. But little does she know, I had no idea this would be the way. So sorry my girl, I had to leave. The guilt for leaving her had caught Zack in a trap: he realized he needed to explain to her the truth and hoped she would understand.

The song “I Knew You Were Trouble” had caught her off guard, which is easy for lots of people to relate to. Taylor Swift thought that the guy she liked was trouble because she was suspicious of him being with another girl. Even though Taylor thought she knew about his lie, she was still attracted to him. Taylor misinterpreted Zack’s sudden need to leave. He explains to her in his song, “You Thought I Was Trouble,” and tells her how he left her for war. Zack never stopped loving her and didn’t want to hurt her.

Forest Gump said, “Life is like a box of chocolates, you never know what you’re going to get.” This is exactly what Taylor was dealing with. She had no idea that her mysterious boyfriend was at stake of being at war. If he wouldn’t have been so secretive, she wouldn’t have made assumptions about him that she wasn’t certain of.  It’s crazy how one point of view can change the whole story around.

Never Give Up

Author's Note: We were told to write a theme essay on a book we had recently read. I decided to choose the book Where the Red Fern Grows because I liked the themes that it had throughout it. Pay attention to how I relate the story to my life and other things in the world.

"You can't just sit back and watch the world change, it matters what you've got to say. There's no one else who can stand in your place, so come on it's never too late." The lyrics that Hannah Montana sings in her song "Make Some Noise" relates to the main character in the book Where the Red Fern Grows by Wilson Rawls. In this book, Billy demonstrates determination, sacrifice and the love of his family which helps him overcome different events and grow to be be a young man.

Bethany Hamilton was close to being a pro- teenage surfer and had lost her arm due to a shark accident. She was pretty much at her peak moment right then and there, and she didn't want to give up surfing just because she had a handicap. Surfing was Bethany's passion and she didn't want to do anything else, so she decided to try surfing again after she was recovered. The first couple of times, she didn't succeed and was almost ready to throw it down the drain, but a little voice inside her head kept telling her to push forward. Just like Bethany Hamilton was determined to surf like nothing had ever changed, Billy Coleman desperately wanted a pair of hunting dogs. Dogs that could help his family out by making money by the raccoon they killed. He has troubles with this though, because his father always says, "No son, those pups are just too expensive". At one point in time, Billy hears of a pup for sale at his grandpa's store down the road and checks it out. By the time he had gotten there, the Pritchard’s, his enemies, had already beaten him to it. This got him discouraged until he saw a piece of newspaper lying on the ground. One of the ads caught his attention, so he reads on. Little did he know that the tiny little ad in his hands would change his perspective on his crummy day. As he walked on home, he continued to look at the article and saw that there were 2 red hounds for sale: $25 each. Billy knew what he had to do: he wanted to purchase the dogs of his dreams that he has forever been longing to have.  He comes to a conclusion that the only way he's going to get that money is if he works, so that is exactly what he starts to do. That boy was so determined, he eventually managed to earn enough money with many long and hard hours of work. 

In the midst of Billy being determined to find his dogs, he has a tight bond with his family. Even when he is on his way to buy his dogs, he goes out of his way to be generous towards his family. He buys candy for his sisters, Alice and Sarah, a pair of new blue jean overalls for his dad, and enough fabric for his mother to make many new dresses. Billy also goes through a hard decision in "the hunt". He has two choices, to go save his grandpa from rolling down the hill in the storm, or to keep hunting to win the trophy. Most people would keep hunting for the prize, but being the caring person he is, Marty puts his bow down and goes to help his hurting grandpa. After the hunt is over, Billy is taken by surprise when he is awarded the winner of the hunt instead of the man who got the most animals. The man who had won gave up his own trophy because in his mind, Billy really had won because of his loyalty he showed toward his family. This reminds me of my parents and how they gave up the luxuries of life to spend more time with my siblings and I. They never had a brand new car and wouldn't think twice about sending us to day cares. Instead, they would take us on trips, bring us bike riding and take us with them to have picnics in the park.

Not only does Billy have a tight bond with his family, but he has a tight bond with his dogs as well. in chapter 20, Big Dan builds up the courage to stand in front of the mountain lion and risk his life for his friends, Little Ann and his owner, Billy. In result, the mountain lion ends up killing Old Dan, but Little Ann and Billy remain alive. This reminds me of something that just recently happened in Brookfield down by a local nail salon. A man came to the salon and was about to shoot his daughter who worked at the salon. They  just so happened to be in a fight so that had made terms even worse. The man was about to fire when another lady who worked with the daughter at the salon came and took the bullet. She sacrificed her own life so that her friend could live. Near the end, after suffering without her best friend, Little Ann refuses to eat. She can't bear the fact that he is gone, and she decides she can't live without him. Marty found her the next morning lying there, no heartbeat right by Old Dan's grave. He cried and cried but knew he had to move on. Billy made a decision that the best thing to do was bury her right by Old Dan. After a couple days, his family was getting ready to move to a different city, but Billy wanted to say bye to his best friends once more. He tries to hold his tears in, but he can't help the blurriness that he now saw. He let the tears drop down, until he saw something unusual and he rapidly wiped his tears away. Right smack-dab in front of him was a red fern the grew right in between the two dog's graves which represented something very sacred. Billy realized that not many people get to experience something as amazing as this, it's a rarity. 

In this heartfelt story, a boy named Billy Coleman becomes more mature and grown up when he expresses his determination, love of his family, and sacrifice. He goes through many different hurdles in his life such as the scare with his grandpa falling down a hill in the midst of a thunderstorm, having a scare with a mountain lion, and losing his two best friends. Billy had a tight bond with his dogs that only he could understand, and was blessed with the time he was able to have with them. After all, a dog really is a man's best friend.